Pursuing Your Gift. Reviews
I felt very inspired (and sometimes to get better at your gift you have to strangely - metaphysically - punch critics in the face). Please keep writing and staying confidant. People need your voice and understanding!! The world will only get darker, those with light need to shine their brightest!!
Although this 'story' has been approved for publication it is not rally what the site was set up for. However, as there already similar works published it would not be fair to reject your work. I must, though, make you aware that future works in a similar vein or theme will not be accepted. One further note: please read my piece 'How to Write a Teaser'. It might prove helpful to you...