Reclaimed Memories Reviews
This story interested me. The only questions I have are:
1) Shouldn't he have washed the blood off?
2) Did he feel ne remorse at all? He just killed his whole family.
3) Why didn't he just run away?
4) Shouldn't his sister like it because he went through a lot of trouble to get it?
Other than that it was a really nice story. It just needs a little editing are revising. It's a little confusing too.
An interesting idea that needs considerably more work to make it into a great story. The whole idea was too big to condense into so few words, which gives your story a somewhat rushed and unfinished feel. However, a good effort nonetheless.
I very much look forward to reading more from you in due course.