I had to read this several times throughout the day cuz I love it soooo much. Idk if other people see it this way, but to me it felt deep, but not unbearably so. Like, it's not overthought, it just is. I really have no other way to explain that. I also really like the rhyming. The scheme wasn't the same exactly, but I feel like where the rhyming words were just made each section really click. Once again, I loveee it! And I can't wait to read more from you!!! :D