Roasting My Old Writing Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
This was enjoyable to read. I will read both versions of your story. Well written.
Your comments are kinda hilarious, especially because I know exactly what it's like to cringe at my old writing. It's pretty interesting and satisfying to see that your old stuff isn't THE WORST EVER writing, but that the new is so much better. It's always fun to see how you've improved.
I don't really remember the story, except that I read it, but I'm sure it's worth salvaging/redoing if you're invested in it.
I'm having the hardest time with setting, and coming up with things for the characters to do other than just talk. I like conversations as much as the next guy-- maybe more, who knows-- but there's gotta be a plot, and some actions