intriguing
I hope to read more

This is amazing! I can't wait to read more!

Very cool idea. Good pace and engaging. I would like to see more please.

This is so good! Upload more please.
Michael and Avery already have a dynamic I know I'll love. Oh, and the writing feels professional enough to make me feel like I'm reading a published e-book.

I enjoyed this. Interesting premise and good pacing. This could be a series..

Loved it!