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2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

As a stand-alone poem this works very well. Regrettably I don't know the work 'Pledge' so cannot relate your poem to it. Chances are that I am not the only person who reads your poem who will have the same problem. It is one of the drawbacks when tying-in your work with something that YOU are familiar with. However, in saying all that, the poem has power and impact, which is to your credit.

Sherzahd gave a rating of 5

Loved this since the first time I read it. It's deep and melancholic, but for some reason it carries a glimmer of hope for me. And it's a much more powerful read if you read it while listening to 'Pledge'. If this was ever recorded, I would buy the song.


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