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lemonslice gave a rating of 2

I like that you begin the story right away and inject tension from the very first line. However, make sure that you spellcheck your writing before submitting it.

Your piece comes across as a lazy effort when you don't adhere to basic grammar, spelling, and punctuation rules. Please use proper paragraphing too.

Savage3footer yes I think the same

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