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3 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
zxivla gave a rating of 5

stay strong <3 life is hard

Rich Powell gave a rating of 3

For your age and given location, this is good. Well done to you. Some points to note, however:

- Try to always use uppercase 'I' when referring to yourself. "I am" instead of "i am"
- Apostrophe for "I'm" because it is shorthand for "I am".
- "I don't want be scared all the time" should be "I don't want to be scared all the time".
- I think "I can't even remember how happiness was like..." should be "I can't even remember what happiness was like..."
- Also, full stops go at the end of the sentence instead of commas (check your final sentence).

Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 4

Well written! You have conveyed your fears clearly and with passion. A very mature submission. Very well done.


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