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Serendipity Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Black_sheep
Black_sheep gave a rating of 5

Okay, I absolutely love this. As someone who is non-binary I am in love with the representation. It was an amazing story but extremely sad. Also, I love the word Serendipity. You area great writer, keep it up.

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Friend
Friend Thanks! I'm very proud of this one and I'm happy you enjoyed it :0
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IanG
IanG gave a rating of 4

You make a good point about people's prejudices against outsiders and anyone who looks different. Let me offer a little constructive criticism.

Hiding from the sun under a large oak reads better than hiding under a large oak from the sun.

If Moss is a plant based life form he should ooze sap not blood as he dies. Perhaps blood is more dramatic but sap is more consistent. Plants drained of sap die just as people drained of blood do.

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Friend
Friend First, Moss uses they/them, if I missed that anywhere tell me and I can fix it, secondly I do like that idea of their blood being more sap like but they are not a plant, just a nymph, in this word the only difference between humans and nymphs are the odd colors, ears and how they were created so that's why they have blood instead of sap or anything like that. Thank you for the review my dude :D
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IanG
IanG Thanks for explaining. Sorry for the delay replying.
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Friend
Friend It's chill :D
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