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Shattered Soul (Chapter One) Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Kaleighishappy
Kat gave a rating of 5

Wow, that was awesome! I just can't. That was good. Wow. This is one of the only times I've been rendered speechless.
-KP

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Auron
Auron Thank you so much! It leaves me warm seeing all the reviews you've left on my stories and it makes me extremely happy!
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PinkyTune
PinkyTune gave a rating of 4

It was a really amazing story; I loved the theme. I heart how suspense takes over at the last. The end of this chapter leaves the readers wondering what'd be happening next.

Overall, nice effort. But, it had some inconsistencies.

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Auron
Auron Thank you so much for the review! I have been writing for a couple of years and I appreciate your (kind) criticism and I will definitely work on editing it.
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