Shattered Soul (Chapter One) Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Wow, that was awesome! I just can't. That was good. Wow. This is one of the only times I've been rendered speechless.
-KP
Auron Thank you so much! It leaves me warm seeing all the reviews you've left on my stories and it makes me extremely happy!
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It was a really amazing story; I loved the theme. I heart how suspense takes over at the last. The end of this chapter leaves the readers wondering what'd be happening next.
Overall, nice effort. But, it had some inconsistencies.
Auron Thank you so much for the review! I have been writing for a couple of years and I appreciate your (kind) criticism and I will definitely work on editing it.
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