She Wolf Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Yes it is a very good story or rather a skeleton of a very good story. Dear author, I try writing short stories too (in Russian). I would like to translate this story to Russian with some modifications perhaps.
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Jozay You should read my other parts that are posted to my page. Regarding your request to translate, you sure can, please send me a copy of the finished product. I'd love to read it.
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This was a good idea that you did not really explore to its full potential. As good as this story is as it stands, with a little more thought and consideration it could have been so much better. Fleshing-out your characters and the drama of what had happened to them to bring them to the situation you describe would give your little tale more impact.
I hope you will write more stories for us to read in future :-)
Jozay Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! All feedback is very much appreciated! Check out part 2 released today. Happy reading... :)
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