I like this very much. Good job 👏

This was amazing! I can't help but imagine what could be happening in her head.

So good! I love all your writing but this one is truly deep. It may be sad but still amazing!

Wow. That is an awesome poem! Well, awesome in working, not in content, because the content is kinda sad and everything but... you know what, I'll stop. It is very well written, and flows very easily. Keep writing! We will keep reading!