Passed me reads better than crossed me. Otherwise its a well written story with a touch of mystery. Why did she stay? You set the scene quickly and effectively. Well done there.
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Sameen Abrar the collapsing building represents the chaos in the mind of the main character. he let go of everyone to keep them from getting hurt. but his love did not want to leave. it didn't matter to her if she was hurt. she wanted to stay. for him
this was all in the main character's head. his love (the separation , to be more precise) is the reason of the chaos in his head
this was all in the main character's head. his love (the separation , to be more precise) is the reason of the chaos in his head