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Sundown Part 1 Reviews

IanG gave a rating of 4

Overall your descriptions are good. Just one thing, 'clutched' the guitar would be better than 'engulfed.' If you engulf something you cover it completely. One hand would'nt cover the whole guitar. Otherwise well done.

Anthony E
Anthony E Just the neck of the guitar/but I may use clutched…thnx
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