Talk in My Sleep Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Wow!! The way that you wrote this really just gave it a beat! I can imagine your poem being a song or something :0
Turnip-head thanks
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I can feel the deep emotion of conflict in this poem. "suicide is on my mind" in stanza 2 is an example of the effect. It also seems like the speaker is struggling with relationship. The shifting subjects about love and anguish shows the struggle. Although it is hard to understand the meaning at first reading, the overall theme of conflict in relationship is clearly communicated.
Turnip-head thank you so much for the review
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Turnip-head I lightly touched up on the punctuation. Hopefully that helps
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