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AlphaRiot
Skyler Kapuschinsky gave a rating of 3

I can see where you're coming from with this story, but there were many flaws. Most notably your grammar and sentence structure. You had way too many run-on sentences and it made it rather difficult to keep track. Other than that, it wasn't bad. Could be better. Good luck with all your writing in the future.

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