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The Beginning of My End Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 3.5 out of 5 Stars
TheForgotten gave a rating of 3

I thought the story was okay. There were a few grammatical errors that created a few 'hiccups' for me.

Rebecca Kathleen
Rebecca Kathleen Thank you for your review. I've been away from the site for a long time so please forgive my terribly delayed reply. I welcome any suggestions you might have.
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Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 4

Although the subject matter isn't something that I (a) have any experience of and (b) have no interest in I felt compelled to read your story to the end. I quite liked you 'conversational' writing style, which I found quite engaging.

I would caution, though, against using slang terms (see the Submission Guidelines) as they left me baffled. Also, the use of numerals in prose is bad practice (again, refer to the Submission Guidelines) and should be avoided. Overall, I enjoyed your writing and look forward to reading more from you.


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