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The Bliss of Childhood Reviews

Khaled Saeed gave a rating of 5

Lovely!! You vividly take the reader into the journey, sharing the moments and the places.
Maybe some para breaks would have been better but this comment of mine should not distract you from your creative, and beautifully captured, writing.

TheForgotten Yes that is a good point about the breaks. Thank you for your very nice feedback!
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