The Boat Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.7 out of 5 Stars
i like it.don't change anything

Tetew thanks thanks appreciate it
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SJD ❤ no problem
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'As the would was being nice' should read 'as the world was being nice.'
'I got unconscious' should read 'I fell unconscious.'
Even so, you wrote some good descriptions. I like the line about dancing dolphins. Keep it up and you'll get past mistakes like those above.
I really liked the description. Nice job! :)

Tetew sorry i have more stories but the site didn't approve it
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Rich Powell It's approved, but visible on your profile only. It was too short for homepage, etc.

Tetew 😳😳 ohh thanks Rich
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