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The Boat Reviews

3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.7 out of 5 Stars
dumper
SJD ❤ gave a rating of 5

i like it.don't change anything

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Tetew
Tetew thanks thanks appreciate it
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SJD ❤
SJD ❤ no problem
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IanG
IanG gave a rating of 4

'As the would was being nice' should read 'as the world was being nice.'
'I got unconscious' should read 'I fell unconscious.'

Even so, you wrote some good descriptions. I like the line about dancing dolphins. Keep it up and you'll get past mistakes like those above.

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Tetew
Tetew sorry if i route it on the spot :( and I'm just a beginner. and thanks for correcting my wrongs
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IanG
IanG Okay Tetew
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Rosa_0023
Despicable_Moi gave a rating of 5

I really liked the description. Nice job! :)

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Tetew
Tetew sorry i have more stories but the site didn't approve it
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Rich Powell
Rich Powell It's approved, but visible on your profile only. It was too short for homepage, etc.
Tetew
Tetew 😳😳 ohh thanks Rich
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