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The First Attempt of My Last Breathe Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
GONE gave a rating of 4

this is good. it might be better if you filled it with more emotion. i take very little emotion back with me from reading this. mostly i enjoyed it. keep going!

15ACooper gave a rating of 4

That was really good for your first story. The last paragraph is a bit confusing but other than that I think that was well written. 😜😜

lioness03 Cheers, I sorted it out now x
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