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The Girl and the Raven - Part III Reviews

3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.7 out of 5 Stars
LeCat127
LeCat127 gave a rating of 4

I agree with what others have said about how the shift in tone is good; it makes it feel like the story is progressing, as we start to see what some of the real issues with the characters' lives are.
I'm intrigued to learn that Raven is the only one of his kind, and I'm curious to see what happens from here.

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 5

Easily my favorite part of the story so far. It flows better, and the dialogue was fun and showed the characters' personalities nicely.
I'm excited for the rest.

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NorthernPhoenix
NorthernPhoenix Thanks! :)
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Sepperince19
Sepperince gave a rating of 5

I think the story is great and I like how you change the mood of the story slightly every time it gives a sense of evolution to the characters that would not be seen otherwise. Keep it up you are doing a great job.

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NorthernPhoenix
NorthernPhoenix Thanks! I'm glad to hear it. :)
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