1. Great job, there are a few errors here and there but nothing major. Does make you wish it were that easy to fix though.
2. You based this mostly off a comic? I know you said it but still this is mostly off a comic?
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Thomas Ray Yeah, I did change it into a story, which meant that the description isn't MADE UP, but IS written completely by me. And the narration that would normally be shown through the artwork had to be totally reversed into words that "paint a picture" in the reader's head.
It was hard and fun, but I can't technically claim all of the credit.
It was hard and fun, but I can't technically claim all of the credit.