The Itty-bitty City Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.7 out of 5 Stars
It's very hard to pull off something of this style - all the perspective changes, time jumping, mediums etc. I think you did really well! Especially as a short story, it can be a challenge to compact so many ideas into such a... scale.
Matt Decker Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review! So glad you enjoyed my short story. It was indeed a challenge to arrange the elements. Positive feedback such as yours make it definitely worthwhile.
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Love how its laid out . Its like your there !
You can't wait to see what happenes next by the first 2 paragraphs .Great job Matt ,
Matt Decker Thanks so much for reading my story and for the review! I really appreciate the positive feedback
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Beautifully crafted
Matt Decker Thank you! I really appreciate it
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