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The Names Written In The Rain (Τα Ονόματα Γραμμένα Στη Βροχή)
The Names Written In The Rain (Τα Ονόματα Γραμμένα Στη Βροχή)

The Names Written In The Rain (Τα Ονόματα Γραμμένα Στη Βροχή)

Franc68Lorient Montaner

-From The Meletic Tales.

The afternoon sun had long vanished beneath a dense canopy of storm clouds that hung heavy over the ancient hills of Lesbos. A restless wind stirred the olive groves and wild herbs, carrying with it the familiar scent of damp earth and salt from the distant sea. Eustorgios
, a peasant from a small village far inland, pushed ahead along the narrow path that wound through the ancient forest, his bare feet slipping on stones slick with the impressions of the early rain.

His journey was not born of necessity but of something deeper—a yearning in his soul he struggled to name. The village he sought lay beyond the wood’s edge, yet the gathering storm threatened to turn his search into a difficult trial. As fat droplets began to hammer the forest canopy, blurring the world into shifting shades of grey, Eustorgios quickened his pace, the coarse wool of his cloak flapping wildly in the wind.

Lightning tore across the sky, illuminating the twisted branches like grasping fingers reaching into the certain void. Thunder rolled, low and ominous, as if nature was warning him to seek shelter. His breath came ragged, his spirit uneasy, until through the sheets of rain, he glimpsed a faint silver gleam nestled in a hollow beneath the trees.

Drawn as if by a sudden force beyond reason, Niko stumbled towards it and found himself before a small spring. The water bubbled cool and clear, untouched by the storm’s wrath. Moss-covered stones formed a natural basin, whilst wildflowers bent under the weight of the rain. Kneeling, Eustorgios cupped the water and drank deeply, the cold liquid soothing his parched throat.

Then, as the rain fell harder, the surface of the spring began to change. Letters—faint, luminescent and shifting like reflections on a disturbed mirror—traced themselves across the water. Names appeared, forming in a delicate script that shimmered with an otherworldly light. They flickered like subtle whispers caught in a dream, impossible to grasp fully.

Eustorgios leaned closer, mesmerised, his pulse quickening. The names were strange to him—foreign yet hauntingly familiar, as if woven from the exact threads of forgotten memories. He tried to read them, to call them out, but the rain surged, washing the letters away before he could even finish.

The spring returned to its tranquil state, a still mirror beneath the waning storm that raged. For a long moment, Eustorgios remained kneeling, the echo of those names humming in his mind. What was the meaning behind them? What message lay hidden in the fleeting script?

Determined to find answers, he rose and trudged towards the nearest village, a cluster of whitewashed homes huddled beneath a steep hill. The villagers greeted him with cautious eyes, their faces etched by years of sun and hardship. Strangers were rare here, he was told.

Eustorgios sought out the oldest amongst them, a woman named Myrina, whose silver hair framed a face worn by time and wisdom. She listened intently, as he told of the spring and the mysterious names.

'You have seen the names in the water. That spring is special, a place where the past whispers to the present', she said softly.

'Why do the names appear?' Eustorgios asked, his curiosity growing.

Myrina’s gaze grew distant, her voice lowering. 'The rain cleanses the earth and the soul. It opens a passage of time between the past and present. The spring remembers those who died here—the names of those lost in a terrible storm long ago, carried by the water and the rain'.

'Are these spirits trapped?' Eustorgios voice trembled.

'No. They are free, but the spring holds their unique memory. It reminds us that life and death are threads of the same cloth, woven by To Ena—the One, the eternal unity. The names appear only when the veil thins, but the rain washes them away again, for memory must be honoured, not held too tightly by the self', she replied.

Other villagers gathered, adding their voices to the tale. Thanos, an elder man with eyes like polished stone, spoke of the great storm that had ravaged the village generations past, claiming many lives. Since then, the spring had become an important place—a mirror of loss and remembrance.

Eustorgios thought of his own village, the faces he’d lost to sickness and time, their names fading like faint whispers in the wind. He wondered if the spring might teach him to hold memory without the need for pain.

Myrina’s eyes held his. 'If you truly seek to know, you must come again during the fiercest storm. Sense the presence of To Ena, the One. Only then will the spring reveal its deeper truths'.

Eustorgios nodded, feeling a profound call stirring within him. He was eager to see whether or not Myrina's words spoke the truth.

The days passed slowly, each evening bringing clouds and distant thunder. Eustorgios stayed amongst the villagers, sharing their meals, listening to their stories—stories of lives intertwined with the land and the sea, of love, loss and quiet endurance.

At night, beneath the canvas of stars hidden by gathering clouds, he found himself thinking of the philosophy he’d heard of To Ena, the One that binds all being. He pondered how the spring might be a reflection of that unity, a place where the boundaries between life and death, self and other, blurred like the rain on the water’s surface.

When the next great storm broke, wild and relentless, Eustorgios returned to the spring. The rain lashed at the trees and beat upon the earth like a drum of the gods, the wind tearing through the branches with furious energy. Eustorgios knelt by the water, his heart steady and his soul open.

'To Ena', he whispered, pondering the eternal unity, 'Will it reveal what the storm conceals?'

The spring trembled beneath the deluge, and the names appeared once more — this time glowing with clarity and depth, but now, they were more than names. Visions bloomed alongside them: a mother cradling her infant in the dim light of a shuttered home; a young man resting on his plough, eyes cast towards the distant horizon; an old man leaning on his staff, his face etched with the wisdom of years passed. The names and visions intertwined, suspended in a metaphysical motion between worlds.

Eustorgios reached out, desperate to grasp the true meaning, but the rain swept in again, washing away the images before his fingers could touch them. The loss did not bring despair. Instead, a quiet peace settled within him.

The spring was a guardian of mysteries—not a source of answers, but a personal space where the balance between presence and absence, knowing and mystery, was honoured.

In the following days, Eustorgios shared his experience with the villagers. Together, they began to visit the spring during storms, kneeling by the water to remember those lost. The names written in rain became a living memory—a reminder that life and death were threads woven by To Ena, an eternal flow beyond beginning or end.

Eustorgios’ restless longing softened. The spring had gifted him a glimpse of the eternal breath, the interconnection of all things—water and rain, memory and forgetting, life and the One. Deep within, Eustorgios felt there was more to uncover of the truth.

One morning, as the storm clouds gathered again, he resolved to return to the spring not just as a seeker but as a participant in its remarkable cycle. He brought with him a small offering, which was a simple wreath of olive leaves, woven with wildflowers gathered from the hillside. As the rain began to fall, he knelt and placed the wreath gently on the water’s surface.

'To Ena. I have come for the truth to be revealed that is hidden beneath the storm', he murmured.

The water shimmered, and the names returned—each more vivid than before, but this time, the spring seemed to respond to his offering. The rain slowed, and the letters lingered longer, their glow brightening to reveal more than names—fragments of stories, laughter, tears and moments frozen like droplets on a leaf.

Eustorgios saw a child playing near the village well, her eyes shining with innocence; a pair of lovers sharing a quiet embrace beneath the stars; a fisherman casting his net into the sea, hopeful despite the uncertain tides.

He realised the spring was not merely a memorial but a living archive—a genuine reflection of lives intertwined with the earth and sky, carried forth in the eternal flow of To Ena.

Overwhelmed, Eustorgios closed his eyes and breathed deeply, feeling the presence of those names—not as ghosts, but as threads in the fabric of existence.

He understood then that memory was not possession but connection—a gift given and received through reverence and acceptance of life. He realised that the water in the spring, just as the water in the storm were part of the process of nature, not of divinity.

In the days that followed, Eustorgios helped the villagers tend to the spring and its surroundings. They cleared the path, planted wildflowers and made a small altar for the dead villagers, whose names appeared in the spring, where wreaths could be laid in their memory. The practice of visiting the spring during storms grew, becoming a time for reflection and connection.

Eustorgios’ journey had begun with a restless search, but it had led him to a profound truth, which was that to remember is to honour the unity of all things, to embrace the flow of life and death without fear.

The names written in the rain were not meant to be captured or held but to remind those who see them of the fragile beauty of existence—a beauty that shines brightest when we accept the presence of To Ena, the One.

In the centre of Lesbos, beneath stormy skies and gentle rains, the spring whispered its ancient song—a melody of remembrance, renewal and the eternal harmony of being.

Eustorgios lingered long after the names had faded from the water’s surface, sitting quietly by the spring as the rain softened to a gentle drizzle. He watched the droplets ripple outwards, each a tiny pulse of life, a small echo of the eternal flow. It struck him how fleeting everything was—the rain, the names, even his own thoughts—yet all were connected by a single thread that stretched beyond time and space.

In that moment, he realised that the spring was more than a place of memory. It was a living symbol of the philosophy he had glimpsed before but never fully understood. To Ena, the One, was not distant or unknowable to him then. It was present here, in the gentle convergence of water and sky, life and death, knowing and mystery.

The names written in rain were like whispers from the soul of the world, calling each passer-by to awaken to the fragile beauty of existence. They invited those people who saw to release their hold on certainty, to accept the impermanence of all things while embracing the unity that underlies all difference.

Eustorgios rose, feeling the calm strength of this understanding settle in his bones. The storm was passing now, and the clouds broke apart to reveal shards of blue sky and golden light. He looked towards the village below, where life continued in its quiet, determined rhythm—a great testament to the enduring will of humanity.

Before leaving, Eustorgios reached into the waters once more, letting his gentle fingers drift through the cool flow. He smiled softly, knowing that though the names would vanish with the rain, their essence was woven into the very fabric of the world—and within him.

With a last look at the ancient spring, he turned towards the path home, carrying with him a gift far greater than knowledge, which was a deep and abiding sense of connection to To Ena, to the many lives that had come before, and to the mystery that binds them all in existence.

The rain may wash the names away, but the truth they whisper remains—an inspiration to live with humility, gratitude and wonder in the changing tides of life.

In the heart of Lesbos, beneath stormy skies and gentle rains, the spring whispered its ancient song—a melody of remembrance, renewal, and the eternal dance of being.

Eustorgios lingered long after the names had faded from the water’s surface, seated on a flat stone where moss clung to the sides and the scent of wet herbs rose from the earth. The rain had slowed to a light mist, soft enough to hear the faint birdsong in the trees beyond. In the hush that followed the storm, he sat still, as if the world itself had paused to breathe with him.

His thoughts drifted, not as scattered worries, but as gentle meditations. He remembered the words of Myrina, the elder, who had spoken of To Ena as not a god but a unity, a thread that bound every moment, every being. He thought, too, of the names in the water—their fleeting presence not a failure of clarity, but a lesson in humility. We are not meant to possess memory, he now realised, but to carry it with reverence.

Each name was not just a person once living—it was a life, a network of choices, gestures, laughter, tears, all woven into the grand fabric of existence. When the rain revealed those names, even for a breath of time, it was as though the spring said: 'Nothing is truly lost. All things are part of the natural flow'.

The villagers had called the spring the flow of the Logos, and rightly so—not because it granted visions or miracles, but because it reminded them that their grief was not theirs alone. In the names washed into the water, they saw their ancestors. In the storm, they saw the echo of their own impermanence.

Eustorgios dipped his hand again into the spring, trailing his fingers through the cool water. He imagined his name, too, would one day be written in rain—briefly glimpsed, then gone, a breath in the wind, but it no longer frightened him. The thought felt natural, even comforting. For what mattered was not the permanence of one's name, but the presence of one's life.

With that presence came a responsibility—not to dominate or cling, but to observe, to understand, and to act with harmony.

Observe life, study what you see, then think about what it means. The motto of Meleticism rose in his mind like a mantra newly understood. Life was not an object to be defined. It was a stream to enter, a rhythm to align with. Meaning did not shout from the mountaintop—it whispered from a single drop falling into water, from a name half-seen in the rain.

When Eustorgios finally rose to his feet, the world felt changed— not because it had transformed, but because he now beheld it through different eyes. He gazed up at the sky, where the sun broke softly through thinning clouds, painting the landscape in silver and gold. The trees, the stones, even the quiet birds seemed imbued with purpose, not because they served a purpose, but because they existed—and that was enough.

Before he turned away, he removed a small piece of parchment from his satchel and, using a fragment of charcoal, wrote a single phrase: 'Remember what passes through you'.

He placed it gently beneath a stone beside the spring, not as a monument, but as a gesture—for the next seeker who might come in storm or silence. He hoped they too would listen, and not simply look.

As he walked back towards the village, his step was no longer hurried. The rain had renewed the path, washing it clean, just as it had cleared the weight from his thoughts. He passed villagers who were tending the soil again, now soft from the storm, and they nodded to him, as if they too had seen something in the downpour.

Later that evening, seated with Myrina and the others by a flickering fire, Eustorgios told his story one last time, but now he told it differently—not as a tale of discovery, but as a tale of becoming. Of how the spring did not simply reveal names, but revealed the soul of things—the memory that belongs not to the past, but to the present when rightly perceived.

When the tale was finished, there was no applause, no exclamation. Only silence. The kind of silence that settles in people who have remembered something true.

In the weeks that followed, others began to leave small tokens at the spring. Not out of superstition, but out of gratitude. A child’s drawing. A folded note. A sprig of thyme. A stone with a name scratched into its face. It became a place of quiet return—not of answers, but of clarity.

As Eustorgios began the descent from the spring, he paused beneath an ancient terebinth tree, its branches dripping with rain and time. The bark was cracked and twisted, like the stories of the villagers, weathered yet enduring. Beneath its canopy, he thought of all those names—strangers, yes, but no longer unknown. They were threads in the tapestry of To Ena, the One bound to him not by blood or name, but by being.

He recalled something that had once said in passing, whilst stirring a pot of lentils: ‘To remember is not only to look back, but to carry forth.’ Eustorgios hadn’t understood it then, but with the rain behind him and the spring fading into mist, he did. These names, even if unreadable to others, were not lost. They were transformed. They had become part of the one who had seen them, held them, pondered them.

The spring no longer needed to reveal its secret. It had done what it was meant to do—to stir the soul into awakening.

And so, as the first stars appeared above Lesbos, Eustorgios walked back into the world. Not with answers, but with awareness.

As for Eustorgios, he would eventually return to his own village, where the fields waited and the sky stretched wide, but within him, something had shifted. He had seen the face of impermanence, and instead of turning away, he had bowed to it—and found something enduring there.

For in every life lived, every name spoken and forgotten, and every drop that fell from the sky to earth, the spring whispered: 'You are not apart. You are a part of the cosmic flow of the Logos'.

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