the suspense and the build up was really good! you should write more
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Terry Adcock Thank you for the kind words and positive review. The several stories I've submitted thus far are the result of participating in a monthly writer's group. I find these low word-count exercises help me to be more concise in my word choices and descriptions and helps while working on my second novel. If you get a chance, I hope you'll check out my first novel, They Call Me Ms., available via Amazon. Had a lot of fun researching and writing that one. Until we chat again, I wish you
All the best!
....Terry Adcock