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The Real Me Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 3.5 out of 5 Stars
Alyssa gave a rating of 5

This is a very good poem and I love all of your stories this one reminds me of well me

Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 2

I understand the very personal nature of this poem. Unfortunately the way you have written it is so 'jumpy' and clunky it just does not flow properly. This makes it a difficult poem to read but - and far more importantly - the message you were trying to put across is completely lost.

In it's present layout it does not really work. This is not your finest hour :- ( I would suggest that you look at it again and re-work the poem into a more reader-friendly version.


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