The Safe Place Reviews
Wow!! It sounds great! I knew it was a father or stepfather at about the third paragraph, but that's just because I have read things like this. There are a few grammar errors, but besides that it's great!
Simply amazing! Brilliant. A poor child's innocence... Abusive Father... Helpless mother... Every single thing is so subtly conveyed with so little text. Children have the amazing ability to speak cute and short.