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The Salvation Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 3 out of 5 Stars
lemonslice
lemonslice gave a rating of 3

You've got a decent structure and an interesting subject matter here. What lets you down are unnecessary typos and grammar mistakes.

This is more of a vignette than story, however. I do suggest you read up on the difference, because a lot of writers receive rejection letters because they don't understand this.

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kiraafinifrock
Kiraa gave a rating of 3

You have a lot of potential and I like stories that are based off of a true event, even if some of the facts could be argued. The ideas within the story were good. There were some grammatical errors. I feel like you could add more emotion through the use of your structure and diction that would leave a more intense lasting impression. Your beginning and ending were good- maybe try using different writing techniques and details throughout the whole story that would really make it great. Overall, good story.

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MyRealNameIsAwesome
MyRealNameIsAwesome Okay, thanks, I'll use that advice in the future.
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