The Stunned Friend Reviews
4 reviews have given an average rating of 4.3 out of 5 Stars
Well written story
Very well written story with a nail biting element! Often times these sorts of things turn out horribly and this is an important lesson showing the dangers of being naive.
A very comedic story with a very serious undertone and an important lesson we can all take from this. The humorous style and paragraph structure is built perfectly for pulling one in to the story. If only the story was longer, because I was hooked fast and could have read on and on!
I quite liked the premise of your story. However, I found the unnecessary time references off-putting and the rather clunky "she goes" and "she comes" and so on also jarred. There are many good points to your story: I hope you will submit more of your work soon.