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The Stunned Friend Reviews

4 reviews have given an average rating of 4.3 out of 5 Stars
pogon1966
pogon1966 gave a rating of 4

Well written story

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TurnThePaige
TurnThePaige gave a rating of 5

Very well written story with a nail biting element! Often times these sorts of things turn out horribly and this is an important lesson showing the dangers of being naive.

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CPierko
CPierko gave a rating of 5

A very comedic story with a very serious undertone and an important lesson we can all take from this. The humorous style and paragraph structure is built perfectly for pulling one in to the story. If only the story was longer, because I was hooked fast and could have read on and on!

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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

I quite liked the premise of your story. However, I found the unnecessary time references off-putting and the rather clunky "she goes" and "she comes" and so on also jarred. There are many good points to your story: I hope you will submit more of your work soon.

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