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The Time of the End Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 2.5 out of 5 Stars
kiraafinifrock
kiraafinifrock gave a rating of 3

I liked the point of the poem and how you developed it. I feel like if you were to use more meaningful words, you'd get across the emotion that comes along with this subject, and it'd really connect more.

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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 2

Your somewhat over-the-top and melodramatic delivery rather undermines the message you are trying to impart. Toned down a little this could be an impressive poem, but for me - as it stands - it is far too much...

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PinkyTune
PinkyTune THANKS! Your reviews are to-the-point, extremely frank, and genuine. I would try to lessen the so-called "melodramatics". In my opinion, a melodrama is considered rather a typically sensational work. So, I decided to try my luck at writing a melodrama.
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