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The Vile Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 3.5 out of 5 Stars
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

Trying to cram such a large subject into so few words leaves glaring gaps in your narrative. What we are left with is a hors d'oeuvre instead of a banquet.

Allowing for the fact that English is not your first language, some of the phraseology is stilted and clumsy. Try to write in a more natural voice rather than one that does not sit well with you. You will find it much easier - and you'll ,learn a lot more, too :-)

Do keep writing.

Victoria Koschoff-Rapkin gave a rating of 4

this is really good, maybe next time it should not be as jumpy.

Nesh Sure.. Thanks for your review (:
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