I'm not normally a poetry lover, but I do like this one very much.
I just have one question: is there a reason you used the word 'shined' instead of 'shone'?
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Matt Decker Thank you for the review. I'm really glad you liked my poetic story.
Yes I used the word "shined" because it rhymed with "each time." When I write poetry, I try to make as many words rhyme in a line or stanza as possible. It's just my style. I think it creates more flow.
Yes I used the word "shined" because it rhymed with "each time." When I write poetry, I try to make as many words rhyme in a line or stanza as possible. It's just my style. I think it creates more flow.