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To the Silence of the Gods Reviews

Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

It always a difficult ask to comment on someone else's religion-themed work. Leaving the theme aside, though, and concentrating on the form of your work is much easier! You have a slightly (if you'll excuse the unintentional pun) 'preachy' way of writing that is slightly off-putting. Whilst I appreciate your good intentions with you poem it left me irritated rather than pleased. I fear that other may also feel the same way, especially non-believers.

ashwin The poem sort of chronicles my spiritual journey from a stout believer of Hinduism to Atheism. However, the core message of this poem is derived from the message of OSHO or 'Acharya Rajneesh' (You must be knowing who he is)
The preachy nature was unintended, sorry you felt it is so.
Hope you liked the flow and the style.
And thank you very much for the honest review. :)
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