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Toby and My Regrets Reviews

IanG
IanG gave a rating of 4

You are right in saying that problems don't end when the war is won. A lot of fantasy stories are based on that assumption, but it seldom works like that in real life.

Eden goes from being overpowered to killing everyone rather quickly. If he's trying to fight his way to your narrator but it takes him time to reach her, that's more consistent.

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Skie
Skie Idk, at that point, I had grown bored of the story so I didn't really put a lot of energy into the end. Thanks for the review!
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