What a great piece. I'll be sure to read other pieces of your work.

Thank you for your submission. You are a talented writer.

I really appreciate your use of words and the way you draw comparisons. This story is strong and elaborate in such a short amount of words, it really drew my attention to it. I can tell you have a great imagination as it comes out in your writing. I found this story to be jagged and demanding and colorful. Thanks for sharing

HOLY CRAP! That was amazing! Just WOW

This was done exquisitely