Two Friends Reviews
if it's true you're totally like me;
oh God!! its so true I'm at loss of words.
Keep it up and remain to be yourself.
I don't know if I should cry, hit the wall, or come yell at you for making such a wonderful (but depressing) story. I need more stuff like this in my life. Good job! And PLEASE write more stuff like this.

That was different. It definitely offers a different perspective on friends, and I feel like it's very relatable. Good job.
1) That was written well, nothing grammatically wrong as far as i can tell.
2) I can completely relate to this story
Good story keep writing!
3) I sort of noticed this while reading but, add a c to Iares to get Icares which describes that friend and switch the k in miko to an n for mino which describes that friend.
Just something i noticed.
