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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

Yes, a classic case of being careful what you wish for...

A well told tale with a couple of bumpy grammatical errors along the way '(ingenuous' is used in the wrong context: ingenious might have been more accurate; 'inhabitance' in this context is wrong: habitation would have been more appropriate)

Another enjoyable offering overall. Well done :-)

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TheForgotten
TheForgotten Yes I see what I've done wrong. Thank you for alerting me in the mistakes!
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