PoeticT I fully understand the wording I have chosen, and yes their and there have always plagued me...but the wording is correct for what I have penned. in other words it was dissipating but I chose the words pertaining to this piece... well its a piece of delusion and madness so if you read it again you may see it...

Andy (Formerly Apemann) I disagree heartily that you have used the correct words in the correct context. Your work needs to be understood to be effective. If you are using words that do not fit the piece - even if it is experimental- then you are wasting your time and that of your reader. The fact that you have used the word 'dissipating' in your reply makes me wonder what you think you are achieving? Where, pray, does that word have ANY relevance to the topic under discussion??? Its use illustrates my point perfectly!

PoeticT dis¦si|pate
[ˈdɪsɪpeɪt]

VERB
(with reference to a feeling or emotion) disappear or cause to disappear:
"the concern she'd felt for him had wholly dissipated" · [More]

synonyms: disappear · vanish · evaporate · dissolve · melt away · [More]
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We may have to agree to disagree on wording. using words meaning the same but different