This story is based on true events in the real world, this Abuse is very bad and sad, I feel bad to all those people out there being abused, I really enjoyed this story though, and hope the two made it out good and the dad goes to prison, this story is awesome and sad, keep up the work, peace.

This is a very dark yet sadly a story that a lot of people can relate to. I thought the way you wrote it was very nice.

You ruined my day but you make a fair point so I cant complain.

This is so relatable and made me cry.

this story meant alot to me this happened to my nephew