Wanderer Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.7 out of 5 Stars
Try 'Father retires to the living room# rather than 'father resigns to the living room'. Resigning refers to quitting a job due to pressure or a crisis, retire can mean leaving a scene or a room voluntarily.
That said, I like your descriptions of nature and the twist at the end is a good one. Keep it up.
I love emotive stories like this. Good job - keep up the good work!
Adalyne5 Wow, thank you so much!
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