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loner246810
loner246810 gave a rating of 3

i feel like if you had just tried to take a little more time to mabey add some rhymes in there then it might become more gripping.

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TheForgotten
TheForgotten There were quite a few rhymes in there lol. But thank you for the feedback nonetheless :)
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