Yellow Green and Blue White Reviews
4 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Imagery we verse through eyes, woven into the sights of words, expressed in the fluid motion of a finger... cool ink I liked this piece it had a good repetitive flow
Some of your couplets are a little 'forced', but overall this is an interesting poem.
Samni thanks, ill try better next poem
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This is a really good poem its really confusing to read lol anyway nice
Samni Thanks, it usually takes two times for people to get the gist.
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This was great! Slightly confusing, but I get the point. I think you did very well. The ending could be explained slightly more, but I like it.
Samni Thank you, I would of improved on the ending, but I didn't want to go on thinking about it.
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