Yobuko's Story Reviews
Man this has terrible format and grammer but the story is amazing and the sadness it brings me is unbleveable
its so god damn sad is this what really happened to you????? i feel sorry for you and i hope a light shines bright in your life
Love the story, needs some better editing.
-From someone who knows the whole story ;)
This is very sad, but it's not a full story yet. Your writing feels rushed and is incorrectly formatted too.
That's horrible!! (Not the writing, the emotions and pain)
I just died inside.
You probably feel a lot worse. I am so sorry. I hope you've gotten over it somehow and were able to fin happiness. I sometimes dread waking up, to be truthful, but I don't know exactly how you feel.
Depression is hard. I hope you feel better soon. Losing loved ones breaks you in a way that can only be forgotten by short distractions. I'm so sorry.