Yobuko's Story Reviews
Man this has terrible format and grammer but the story is amazing and the sadness it brings me is unbleveable
Love the story, needs some better editing.
-From someone who knows the whole story ;)
This is very sad, but it's not a full story yet. Your writing feels rushed and is incorrectly formatted too.
That's horrible!! (Not the writing, the emotions and pain)
I just died inside.
You probably feel a lot worse. I am so sorry. I hope you've gotten over it somehow and were able to fin happiness. I sometimes dread waking up, to be truthful, but I don't know exactly how you feel.
Depression is hard. I hope you feel better soon. Losing loved ones breaks you in a way that can only be forgotten by short distractions. I'm so sorry.