Skyler Kapuschinsky

I really enjoyed your story;?especially the plot began to thicken with the emotions of Billy and why he did what he did. Despite the story taking a dark turn I understand the message you were trying to get across.

Good story with a good theme, however at times it was a little rushed which made it hard to read in certain parts. Other than that it was really good. I liked the purple wings, it shows a kid's imagination well.