United States • 25 y/oReviews Given
This was really well written.
This story is very well written, I actually wanted you to keep going. Your story actually made me physically and mentally ready. Well done
This is an intense and very heavy story. You wrote it very well.
I enjoyed this. I love how you can tell you put emotion into it. I would say there were some grammar mistakes which is perfectly fine, just, at times made it harder to read. Overall well done.