United States • 48 y/oReviews Received
I enjoyed this story well written and worded!!!! nice job!!!
Hmmmm very cool story however I was scrolling through Instagram and I saw a post talking about a movie they wanted to write called brace for it about a girl who searched for a doctor trying to get her braces off during the apocalypse I have seen the post many times sense.
Take a little more care with your punctuation and spelling as it mars your story.
One point of note: it is not good practice to use numerals in prose. One should always spell the number in full i.e. 'two-thirty' for 2.30.