United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I usually don't read things along these lines but the story was well written and left suspense at every corner. The ending was quite unsatisfying; but I believe you did that for a reason. Good job.
There are some great aspects of this price of writing, but there is also a feeling of incompletion. Please do write more.
Not friends with Robert Rankin, are you? :)
A couple of dialogue punctuation errors, but otherwise a pretty funny tale. Reminiscent of Monty Python delight.
I love micro fiction because of stories like this one. The first line sounds very differently when read a second time. :)
Keep up the writing!
i really liked it
