Andy (Formerly Apemann)

There are many poems about time but yours was rhymic and worded just right. Again another wonderful piece you offered to us.

i really like it because its true and that always happens to someone and its the true on how people think about others thank you for making me understand how words can really hurt someone

I understand what a person would go through since I have and still am getting bullied.
The first time it has ever started was in second grade and it has never stopped ever since.
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I have been reading the chapters and I have to say by far these are the best things I have ever read in my entire life (and i read over 20 books in 2 weeks or less)

With all my heart I loathe people that do it to others like that. It is just so.... ugh. Anyways like the way you came about with this. It is excellent put out and on point.

I can really relate to this poem. I really like the poem wording, but overall I just love this poem!

I think many nine-to-fivers can relate.

It may not, as you say, be your best, but it is the truth behind the words of this story that struck me. A reader can't ask for any more than that.

I'm 78 and deal with this uncompromising urge to write every day. The worst is when the dreaded 'writer's block' prevails. The minutes, and hours, and days drag on and on.

And then, suddenly, I'm writing again and once again there aren't enough hours in the day or days in the week.

I give this five stars for heeding the prodding to get it down on paper. I think of how many jewels are lost because writers do nothing because they don't think it's good enough. I say poppycock - write! and then write some more.

Ciao,
JT